ext_1466 ([identity profile] commodorified.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] marnanightingale 2006-08-04 10:18 am (UTC)

Re: Fire Sermon fdbk

My favourite line though was "Do I know anyone you haven't had, my lord?" which was, of course, funny, but it was also joyous, and just the right note for that moment in the story.

I love you. You are my new Favourite Reader. That is EXACTLY what I wanted that line to be and do.

*grins madly*

It was really... you know, the whole fic's building up to that moment, and there's all this tension. And it had to be PUNCTURED. But in just the right way, or the whole fic fails, really.

And yeah, that line just says everything to me. It's all about the no-illusions, no drama love.


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